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 ===== Song =====
-During the festive season, Patreon's of The British IBM can make requests for bespoke songs to be written about by Aidy. Electron Greg requested a song to be written about Kit's adoption process and Electron Greg's hopes that everything would go smoothly. The song written was called 'Kit' and ended up featuring on the album 'Friday Night at the Twitch Bar'.
+During the festive season, Patrons of The British IBM can make requests for bespoke songs to be written by Aidy. Electron Greg requested a song to be written about Kit's adoption process, expressing his hope that everything would go smoothly. The resulting song was titled 'Kit' and ended up featuring on the album 'Friday Night at the Twitch Bar.'
 ===== Album Artwork =====
-Kit's silhouette can be seen in the window of the bar on the album cover for 'Friday Night at the Twitch Bar'.
+Kit's silhouette can be seen in the window of the bar on the album cover for 'Friday Night at the Twitch Bar.'
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